Introduction:

 

Due to our vacation our presentations were a little bit delayed, our appologies! 

This week we will tell about ourselves. 

 

The last few weeks we've been talking about the Rights of te child. 

 

 

Made by: Julian, Mika, Rudie, Bjorn, Richard

 

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Contributions Challenge 1:

 

Dutch – version

Veilig huis

 

Veilig huis wens je iedereen niet jij alleen.

Kinderen horen niet buiten te slapen 

In een huis met bed dat doen ze met veel  pret

Met en warm lekker bed en een kom lekker snert 

En ook  tv zien ze Bert

 

Ze moeten naar school dan doen ze met plezier werken en schrijven doen ze op papier 

 

English - version

A safe home

 

A safe home you wish for everyone, not just you alone.

Childeren are no supposed to sleep outside.

In a home with a bed, that will give them price.

With a warm, nice bed, with Dutch soup called snert.

And watching Sesamstreet, haring fun with Bert.

 

They have to go too school, with fun and learning skills on paper.

 

 

Thanks for listen. 

Sylvano

William

Mick

Daniëll

 

 

Meike, Ellen, Julia, Maureen, Linda have made this movie and song:

 

 

  

 

 

Made by Joey, Celina, Esmee, Diana

 

 

 

 

 

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Feedback from: Lyceum de Grundel

Vechtdal college: good illustrations and written stories

Greets, Viviène

 

Your video looks nice and very original. It is different than the rest and now we see you in another way. I hope you will do the next challenge soon.

Greets Kirsten, Valerie, Merel and Marieke.

 

The intro video looks cool. I hope you will do your second challenge soon. I'm curious to see.

Friendly greets,

Valentijn en Michiel

 

Nice video, it is a nice idea to make a video about your school. We like that. We like to see more .

Greets Niek and Jasper.

 

They don’t have the challenge one, so I can’t give a feedback on it.

Feedback by Noortje 2A1

 

To be honest, I can’t really give you a feedback. You didn’t finished the first challenge. I think you should be more focussed on this program, and you have to hurry up. I give you 1/5 stars, you know why.

Greetings, Melik

 

Hello, we like your video and think your introduction is good.
We also like the video about your school, it’s nice that you show us your school.
Bye,  Hieke, Ilse and Britt

 

 

The intro video looks cool, it’s very original. The editing was very good, because it was very fun to watch. Because you’ve made a video we know are getting to now you on a very special way. Your school seems really nice! Hopefully you will do your second challenge soon. We are very curious to see!

 

The children rights in The Netherlands are all the same, so there is nothing that you didn’t know yet.

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Feedback from: Ashram College

 

Well done. Nice that you have made good movies. had a lot of guts with singing and rapping. beautiful text of the songs/rap. There is clearly a great deal of attention to the drawings. they are good with a nice story.  - Vera

 

You have a really nice class. The drawings are very beautiful and the story behind it is creative. The

rap is cool and it sounds really good. It is a very nice poem.

Greetings,

Emma, Maaike en Noa

 

Hello

The little clips you did where very well done but i could’nt hear it too well the rap you made was nice

The clip whith the 4 girls+the teacher

 

By: Joshua Lammers and Rens van Eijden of the Ashram College

Hello Vechtdal College,

The ideas are very original. Nice rap, good song and nice draws. A tip:

Sometimes it was difficult to hear the lyrics by the rap. Creative things!

 

we think the video was fuzzy but the english was not perfect and we think you should record your

audio separately and maybe get some guy to say it in good english

but overall it wasnt to bad

 

 

Hello, we think that your video was very creative. We really enjoyed it because you can sing very good and the message was clear enough. It was also very good and cute and your drawings were beautiful.

 

Jouiriya and Miryam

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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